[31988] trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/installing.xml

[jmpp at macports.org]

Revision: 31988
          http://trac.macosforge.org/projects/macports/changeset/31988
Author:   jmpp at macports.org
Date:     2007-12-12 23:04:07 -0800 (Wed, 12 Dec 2007)

Log Message:
-----------
Improve wording a bit and correct a typo.

Modified Paths:
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    trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/installing.xml

Modified: trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/installing.xml
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--- trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/installing.xml	2007-12-13 06:58:47 UTC (rev 31987)
+++ trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/installing.xml	2007-12-13 07:04:07 UTC (rev 31988)
@@ -190,16 +190,16 @@
                     variable if and only if:
                     <itemizedlist>
                       <listitem>
-                        <para>if already exists;</para>
+                        <para>it already exists;</para>
                       </listitem>
                       <listitem>
-                        <para>its content is not empty;</para>
+                        <para>its value is not empty;</para>
                       </listitem>
                       <listitem>
-                        <para>the MacPorts path is not already there;</para>
+                        <para>the MacPorts path is not already in it;</para>
                       </listitem>
                       <listitem>
-                        <para>its content does not contain empty components, such
+                        <para>its value does not contain empty components, such
                           as "/usr/share/man:", ":/usr/share/man" or
                           "/usr/share/man::/usr/X11R6/man".</para>
                       </listitem>

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