[134584] trunk/doc-new/guide/xml
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Mon Mar 30 17:38:57 PDT 2015
Revision: 134584
https://trac.macports.org/changeset/134584
Author: ionic at macports.org
Date: 2015-03-30 17:38:57 -0700 (Mon, 30 Mar 2015)
Log Message:
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doc-new/guide/xml: misc grammar fixes (remove the the duplicated words, badly designed headlines, etc.)
Modified Paths:
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trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portfile-phase.xml
trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portfile-startupitem.xml
trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portfiledev.xml
trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portgroup-python.xml
trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/project.xml
trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/using.xml
Modified: trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portfile-phase.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portfile-phase.xml 2015-03-31 00:38:47 UTC (rev 134583)
+++ trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portfile-phase.xml 2015-03-31 00:38:57 UTC (rev 134584)
@@ -1035,7 +1035,7 @@
distribution files, filenames must be included to associate files
with their checksums.</para>
- <para>At least two checksum types (e.g., rmd160 and sha256) should be used to
+ <para>At least two checksum types (typically rmd160 and sha256) should be used to
ensure the integrity of the distfiles.</para>
<itemizedlist>
Modified: trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portfile-startupitem.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portfile-startupitem.xml 2015-03-31 00:38:47 UTC (rev 134583)
+++ trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portfile-startupitem.xml 2015-03-31 00:38:57 UTC (rev 134584)
@@ -235,7 +235,7 @@
<title>Script StartupItems</title>
<para>StartupItems of type <quote>script</quote> create a wrapper during
- port installation for <command>daemondo</command> that that will be used
+ port installation for <command>daemondo</command> that will be used
to launch a daemon startup script present in an application's source
distribution (MacPorts does not create daemon startup scripts) for daemons
that require a script.</para>
Modified: trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portfiledev.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portfiledev.xml 2015-03-31 00:38:47 UTC (rev 134583)
+++ trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portfiledev.xml 2015-03-31 00:38:57 UTC (rev 134584)
@@ -1178,7 +1178,7 @@
<para>Thus the buildbot helps to keep MacPorts consistent on various
OSX versions, i.e., a maintainer does not need access to these versions anymore in
order to assure that the port(s) maintained build without problems. Currently only
- the default port variants will be build and kept.</para>
+ the default port variants will be built and kept.</para>
</section>
Modified: trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portgroup-python.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portgroup-python.xml 2015-03-31 00:38:47 UTC (rev 134583)
+++ trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/portgroup-python.xml 2015-03-31 00:38:57 UTC (rev 134584)
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
subport that will be installed if the user asks to install <quote>py-foo</quote>
rather than, e.g., <quote>py26-foo</quote> or <quote>py27-foo</quote>. If not explicitly set, a
reasonable default is chosen from the list in <code>python.versions</code>.</para>
- <para>For apps (i.e., name does not start with <quote>py-</quote>), this chooses
+ <para>For applications (i.e., name does not start with <quote>py-</quote>), this chooses
which version of python to use, and must be set. It can be changed
in variants if desired.</para>
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@
<term>python.link_binaries_suffix</term>
<listitem>
- <para>Suffix to add the the names of the links created in
+ <para>Suffix to add to the names of the links created in
<filename>${prefix}/bin</filename> when <varname>${python.link_binaries}</varname>
is enabled. Can be cleared if no suffix is desired.</para>
Modified: trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/project.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/project.xml 2015-03-31 00:38:47 UTC (rev 134583)
+++ trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/project.xml 2015-03-31 00:38:57 UTC (rev 134584)
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
account to create tickets.</para>
<section id="project.tickets.prerequisites">
- <title>Before you file a new ticket</title>
+ <title>Before Filing a New Ticket</title>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
@@ -848,7 +848,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>the identity you'd like to use as a member of the project, A.K.A. the
+ <para>the identity you'd like to use as a member of the project, a.k.a. the
“handle”, as part of your <literal><replaceable>handle</replaceable>@macports.org</literal>
alias.</para>
</listitem>
Modified: trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/using.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/using.xml 2015-03-31 00:38:47 UTC (rev 134583)
+++ trunk/doc-new/guide/xml/using.xml 2015-03-31 00:38:57 UTC (rev 134584)
@@ -97,8 +97,8 @@
<para>The <option>sync</option> action performs a subset of <option>selfupdate</option>. It synchronizes the
ports tree, as does <option>selfupdate</option>, but it does not check for MacPorts upgrades. On OS X,
- unless there is a special reason not to do so, you should always run <link
- linkend="using.port.selfupdate">selfupdate</link>.</para>
+ unless there is a special reason not to do so, run <link
+ linkend="using.port.selfupdate">selfupdate</link> instead.</para>
<para><option>sync</option> does not accept any switches.</para>
</section>
@@ -530,11 +530,11 @@
<varlistentry>
<term><option>--unrequested</option></term>
<listitem>
- <para>By default, each port you install using the <option>install</option> (vs. as a dependency
- of a different port) is marked as <quote>requested</quote>. If you want MacPorts to treat
- a port you installed manually as if it was automatically installed as a dependency (e.g., if
- a dependency failed to build and you re-tried installing the dependency only), pass this
- flag.</para>
+ <para>By default, each port you install using the <option>install</option> explicitly (contrary to ports
+ installed as a dependency of a different port) is marked as <quote>requested</quote>.
+ If you want MacPorts to treat a port you installed manually as if it was automatically installed
+ as a dependency (e.g., if a dependency failed to build and you re-tried installing the dependency only),
+ pass this flag.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
</variablelist>
@@ -1025,7 +1025,7 @@
<section id="using.variants.invoking">
<title>Invoking Variants</title>
- <para>A variant can only be invoked when a port is installed. After you have determined what variants
+ <para>A variant can only be selected when a port is installed. After you have determined what variants
a given port has, if any, you may install a port using the variant by specifying its name preceded by
a plus or minus sign on the command line, for example</para>
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